Storyboard Modified Second

Narrative

The story begin with some graduates fall down from the sky and the title shows the topic of the animation-Low payment in terms of the Taiwanese Youth.Then the scene transfer to the street , cars, indicates that the youth lives in a high pressure environment.Train comes and lots of graduates get off the train.

The transitions trace back to the day when they graduated.

Graduators hug their friends and parents.

After that, a gap show up and separate the both mother and graduate.

The graduate walk into a factory, and she sees a machine which turn the graduates into workers and there is a big hand put a small coin to produce the workers.

Then the scene transfer to the whole setting the factory, works work hard on the production line.And the big hand observe them and mark the works in a phases of 10 years.

The graduate want to change it, so she take out a yellow envelop, then put it into the machine. Suddenly, everything changed. The graduate take out the yellow envelop, and she succeed for saving all other works.

Things should be remove: Too much scene for graduation, it's not necessary at all. Also the production line doesn't need to repeat for two times.