Storyboard Final Edition

For the final edition, I was going to set the factory part as the ending scene of my animation. But after the final critic with Sue and Steve, they advised me to add the turning point and also to extend the storyline of my film.The reason was that they afraid the subject of current film was not clear enough to be understood by my audience. In order to complete the clip, I chose to add the Yellow Envelope Co. part and the yellow light as a turning point.

The film could be seen as four parts: graduates get off the train, boring working factory, yellow light show up as a rescue and redeem, then end in the Yellow Envelope Co.

The yellow light follow the production line and find out there is a man who noticed about the light, and waiting for being rescued. Broken chain indicates the destroy of the working system.