Storyboard Modified Third

After I showed the recent process to Steve , he thought that I should transfer the face expression of my characters. The character should look more depression and hopeless.

Also, he advised me to modify the graphic style of my AD which showed in the animation. It's better to design the Ad in a typography way but not illustrated style. Furthermore, he said I should change the title of my film to a stronger and powerful 口號， but not the original title " the low-wage payment in terms of the Taiwanese youth". For me new version : We Deserve More !

Except all the modify of the assets and graphs style. The most importent thing is the further development of the storyboard. We both agreed that the yellow train which showed on the platform can be a symbolisation of the yellow envelop.

After the character arrive at the platform, he notices that there is a yellow train, and he take the train rather that the original one. On his way to the location, he sees the different Ad which displays its of advantages for the workers who work in the yellow company.

The idea of turning point is from my friend. Overlooking angle and top view.

The yellow light indicates the hope and had its own self-awareness.

Looking for its redeemer.

The second scene- Page Turn After the tutorial with Sue, she advised me to add the scene in between the factory and the yellow light. I drew an initial sketch as the photo shows below. I used the shadow of window in my animation to make a transition to the page turn scene.

The scene which didn't use in my animation in the end. Big Mouth Scene, the mouth identify the evil employers. Once the workers don't qualify to their job anymore,they will get fired.

The big monster will eat them.

Initial title sequence indicates the Taiwan island. But Steve thought the graphic style doesn't fit the campaign.